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It is said that reading books or watching films or movies give us not only motivations and relax but also it is the best way the expanding of our knowlegde about the world. If you had a diificult day, you should give yourself any chance to make relaxtion by watching movies or reading books which you want. As for me, I prefer to read narrative books which belongs to ancient periods. When I was a child, I used to read a lot of literary books. By this way my speaking and crtical thinking skills improved and also I had wide horizond about literature. I can consider that about the novel "O'tkan kunlar". The book was written by the Uzbek greatest writer Abdulla Qodiriy. Every Uzbek people know about him and his works too. The book is about the love of Otabek and Kumush. They fall in love with each other at first sight. Despite of both of them cannot introduce each other. In fact, all the richest and handsome men want to marry with Kumush, it is no doubt that she is famous for her beauty around Margilon, but nobody can dare to say about their love to her. Otabek is also handsome and an only child for his family. He is a well-known young man for that reason lots of people want to give their daughters to his as a wife. Lastly, Otabek comes to Margilon on his business, as a result he falls in love with Kumush. At last, he achieves her but Kumush has not got any ideas about it. After wedding party she sees Otabek and it will be her like a dream. They live very happily during some times. But the parents of Otabek do not agree with him that living in Margilon and they have decided to marry him to other girl is called Zaynab. Zaynab is so attractive girl but Otabek loves his wife. However, he does not dare to refuse the decision of his parents, unless he dislikes to marry her. After a few days, Kumush comes to Tashkent and has decided to stay with her husband because of her pregnancy. The coming of Kumush is an unexpected situation to Zaynab. And the visit causes to her making angrey but she tries to restraint her nervious. On the day which Kumush is waiting for her baby's birth, Zaynab decides to kill Kumush by mixing poison in her meal. As a result Kumush dies, . She leaves her baby. Otabek chases Zaynab from his home. In this novel we can know every Uzbek culture and traditions which belongs to Uzbek wives and their difficult lifes. The death of Kumush makes every people cry. Inspite of, Zaynab kills her, I think she wants to live happily like Kumush, she also desires to be loved with Otabek, that is why we cannot blame on her in this event.
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is said
that reading
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or watching films or movies give us not
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motivations and relax
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but
also
it is the best way the expanding of our
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knowlegde
about the world. If you had a
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diificult
day, you should give yourself any chance to
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make
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relaxtion
by watching movies or reading
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books
which you
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want
. As for me, I prefer to read narrative
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books
which belongs to ancient periods. When I was a child, I
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used
to read
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a lot of
literary
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books
. By this way my speaking and
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crtical
thinking
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skills
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improved
and
also
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horizond
about literature.

I can consider that about the novel
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tkan
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kunlar
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book
was written
by the Uzbek greatest writer
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Abdulla
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Qodiriy
. Every Uzbek
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people
know about him and his works too. The
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book
is about the
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love
of
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Otabek
and
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Kumush
. They fall in
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love
with each other at
first
sight.
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Despite of
both of them cannot introduce each other.

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men
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want
to marry with
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Kumush
, it is no doubt that she is
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famous
for her beauty around
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Margilon
,
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but
nobody can dare to say about their
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love
to her.
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Otabek
is
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handsome and an
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only
child for his family. He is a well-known young
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man
for that reason lots of
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people
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want
to give their daughters to his as a wife.
Lastly
,
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Otabek
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comes
to
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Margilon
on his business,
as a result
he falls in
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love
with
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Kumush
. At last, he achieves her
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but
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Kumush
has not
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got
any
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ideas
about it. After wedding party she
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sees
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Otabek
and it will be her like a dream. They
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live
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happily
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times.
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Otabek
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agree
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Margilon and
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Zaynab
.
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so
attractive girl
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but
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Otabek
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loves
his wife.
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, he does not dare to refuse the decision of his parents, unless he
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dislikes to marry
her. After a few days,
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Kumush
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comes
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because
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Kumush
is an unexpected situation to
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Zaynab
. And the visit causes to her making angrey
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she tries to restraint her
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nervious
. On the day which
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Kumush
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Kumush
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Kumush
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She
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Otabek
chases
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Zaynab
from his home.

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lifes
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Kumush
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makes
every
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cry.
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Zaynab
kills her, I
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think
she
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live
happily
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Kumush
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IELTS essay Writing review of a book

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
483 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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