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writing in formal email to help to find a job

writing in formal email to help to find a job 2Kdkb

Good morning, I hope you are well, too. yes, I applied for RefuAids language programmes to help with my English, to get a job and to apply for university. Unfortunately, it was an English programme with self-study. I wished it was face to face course. I am not sure about the possible help that your organisation would provide it. ( As for the university, I contacted some universities that offer Arabic and Islamic studies; they asked me for IELTS at least 6. 5. (until this time I couldn't do that)). It is one year course to be able to teach the Arabic language at public schools. I would like to discuss that I would like to work as an Arabic teacher and how that is possible. I attached my CV. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards Kholoud Gonbos

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
Good
 morning,

I hope you are well, too.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYes
yes
, I applied for Possible spelling mistake found.RefrainsRefunds
RefuAids
 language Possible spelling mistake. 'programmes' is British English.programs
programmes
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 with my English, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a job and to apply for university.

Unfortunately, it was an English Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
 with self-study. I wished it was face to face course.

I am not sure about the possible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 that your Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 would provide it.

Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis(
( 
As for the university, I contacted This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 universities that offer Arabic and Islamic studies; they asked me for IELTS at least 6. 5. (until this time I couldn't do that)). It is one year course to be able to teach the Arabic language at public schools.

I would like to discuss that I would like to work as an Arabic teacher and how that is
 possible.

I attached my CV.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Kind regards

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Kholoud
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Gonbos