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applied for RefuAids language programmes

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Good morning, I hope you are well, too. Yes, I applied for RefuAids language programmes to help with my English, to get a job and to apply for university. Unfortunately, it was an English app with self-study. I wished it was face to face course. I am not sure about the possible help that your organisation would provide it. (As for the university, I contacted some universities that offer Arabic and Islamic studies; they asked me for IELTS at least 6. 5. (until this time I couldn't do that)). It is one year course to be able to teach the Arabic language at public schools. I would like to discuss that I would like to work as an Arabic teacher and how that is possible. I attached my CV. looking forward to hearing from you in the near future. Kind regards Kholoud Gonbos
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I hope you are well, too.

Yes, I applied for
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RefuAids
language
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programmes
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with my English, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a job and to apply for university.

Unfortunately, it was an English app with self-study. I wished it was face to face course.

I am not sure about the possible
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help
that your
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organisation
would provide it.

(As for the university, I contacted
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some
universities that offer Arabic and Islamic studies; they asked me for IELTS at least 6. 5. (until this time I couldn't do that)). It is one year course to be able to teach the Arabic language at public schools.

I would like to discuss that I would like to work as an Arabic teacher and how
that is
possible.

I attached my CV.

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looking
forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Kind regards

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Kholoud
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Gonbos
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IELTS essay applied for RefuAids language programmes

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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