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Writing email for rising salary

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From Huy to managers Dear managers. I write this email to ask for raise salary. I have tried hard and spent much time for company. I have worked for 2 years at Junior front-end developer position. I have got skill of code and practical experience. Look at this. This position in another company is higher salary than here. If you don't raise salary for me, I will jump job. And you will regret for this. Thanks Huy
From
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Huy
to managers

Dear managers. I write this email to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
raise salary. I have tried
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
and spent much time for
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company
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have worked for 2 years at Junior front-
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end
developer position.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
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got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
of code and practical experience. Look at this. This position in another
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is higher salary than here. If you don't raise salary for me, I will jump job. And you will regret for this.

Thanks
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Huy

IELTS essay Writing email for rising salary

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
76 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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