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Writing email for rising salary

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From Huy to managers Dear managers. I write this email to ask for raise salary. I have tried hard and spent much time for company. I have worked for 2 years at Junior front-end developer position. I have got skill of code and practical experience. Look at this. This position in another company is higher salary than here. If you don't raise salary for me, I will jump job. And you will regret for this. Thanks Huy

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Huy
 to managers

Dear managers. I write this email to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 raise salary. I have tried This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 and spent much time for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have worked for 2 years at Junior front-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 developer position. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 of code and practical experience. Look at this. This position in another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is higher salary than here. If you don't raise salary for me, I will jump job. And you will regret for this.

Thanks Possible spelling mistake found.HeyBuyHubGuyHayHut
Huy