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industralization is important for vanish the poverty . to what extent do u agree.

industralization is important for vanish the poverty. Nmdlj

IT is considered that poverty remains a critical issue for some countries after efforts from past decades. It is true that industrial revolution brought a big development worldwide. International industrialization has a more significant impact on indigence curb in some nations. To commence with, birth of industrial revolution start with import export market. Moreover, companies begin providing online training to client. In others words, it has been observed that there were local companies establish in one country, afterwards due to awareness local entrepreneurs came in contact with foreign exchangers. For Example, Bangladesh and Pakistan countries accounted for 10 top brands which are imported in United States. Therefore, local corporations jumped to international level, which assist to improve economic condition for there countries. No one can deny establishment of industrialization creates numerous opportunities for citizens. To epitome it, local organizations enables to offer career opportunities for local communities. In addition to, which is very important for survival in life for every individual and it allows to lead a sustainable life for take care their families. For instance, some of multinational such as Amazon bring forth to reduce unemployment rate and impoverishment. As a consequent, there type of firms plays a vital role to diminish penury problems. To conclude, although there are some nations are still struggling with poverty like concerning issue, it has been improved global industrialization gave push it to improve wealth condition in many countries.

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