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My name is Sami Alanazi but everyone calls me Sami. I am 18 years old. I am from Saudi Arabia. My hometown is called Hafar Albatin. I have been living there for 18 years additional it is a huge city. I live there with my parents. I have one sister and one brother. We have an amazing relationship. I decided to move to king Fahad university as I want to be a successful chemical engineering because I am in love with chemistry. Although I like chemistry, I am passionate about math and chemistry, moreover I am interested in reading books like novels. what about my favourite hobby? I especially like football, whenever I have a chance to get together with my friends to play some football I go out with them.
My name is Sami
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Alanazi
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everyone calls me Sami. I am 18 years
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. I am from Saudi Arabia. My hometown
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Hafar
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Albatin
. I have been living there for 18 years additional it is a huge city. I
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have one sister and one brother. We have an amazing relationship. I decided to
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move
to king Fahad university as I want to be a successful chemical engineering
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because
I am in
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love
with chemistry. Although I like chemistry, I am passionate about math and chemistry,
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am interested
in reading books like novels.
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hobby? I
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like football, whenever I have a chance to
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football I go out with them.
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IELTS essay Writing about yourself and talking about it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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