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writing about your hobbies?

writing about your hobbies? wMNal

First of all, I'd love to reading books in my free time. When I was a children, my parents used to read me fairy tales or children's books in bed, and reading books become a habit that I keep up to now. Romance and adventure are my favorite types of book but I read any book that appeal to me. Secondly, I usually listening to music any time I can, especially when I'm stressed. The rhythm and melody help me relax. R&B when I have melancholy and classical music when I need concentration. At last, I like to travelling so much. Travelling is one of the best ways to help me get away from stress in my daily life. I can experience many things such as cultures or customs which make a considerable contribution to my knowledge when I discover new lands. So what's about your hobbies? I really curious about what you want to do when you have free time. Looking forward to your reply.

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 what's about your hobbies? I really
 curious about what you want to do when you have free time. Looking forward to your reply. 