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Assisting a man who had a traffic accident while riding my bicycle to exercise.

Assisting a man who had a traffic accident while riding my bicycle to exercise. Pk2ME

Last month, I assisted a man who had a traffic accident while riding my bicycle to exercise. That day was distinct from the others. I didn't cycle to the lakeside, where I still did 10 circles every day. I decided to go mountain biking about five kilometers from my house because it was the weekend. On that road, I witnessed a person in a traffic accident on the road by chance. He appeared to be bleeding profusely, and no one was nearby. The person responsible for the accident was nowhere to be found. I rushed over to see him and called a taxi to take him to the nearest hospital. Because he had lost so much blood, the doctors advised me to donate more. I volunteered to give him blood. Not only was I in good health, but my blood type was O as well. He regained consciousness after obtaining a blood transfusion. The nurses helped him to contact his family. He was discharged from the hospital about ten days later and came to thank me.

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 did 10 circles every day. I decided to go mountain biking about five kilometers from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
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, and no one was nearby. The person responsible for the accident was nowhere to be found
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but
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 type was O as well
. He regained consciousness after obtaining a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withjuice
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 transfusion. The nurses This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
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 from the hospital about ten days later and came to thank me. 