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ready meals have revolutionized eating at home but at what price

ready meals have revolutionized eating at home but at what price J3GK5
In the age of speed that we live nowadays. Food industry has changed when it comes to ready meals that have affected our behavior. But what is the cost we will take in our daily lives? The revolution on ready meals has the advantage that you will save time when it comes to cooking from scratch, doing groceries shopping and meal planning. It's perfect for many people who cannot find enough time in the day to prepare the meal from scratch. In addition, you can keep it in the fridge as an option for busy days. On the other hand, this habit is not the healthier way to eat our daily meals. One disadvantage of ready meals; you cannot control what goes into a meal, whenever it comes into ingredients because ready meals are often high in salt and fat. Eating food high in bad calories often may cause you to gain weight and expose your health to risk. In order that we should not eat ready meals regularly. However, ready meals have revolutionized the way that we eat. Enjoy eating at home and the process of cooking because home cooked meals are the best option to be happier and healthier.
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nowadays. Food industry has
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has the advantage that you will save time when it
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to cooking from scratch, doing groceries shopping and
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planning. It's perfect for
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people
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from scratch.
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it in the fridge as an option for busy days.

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. One disadvantage of
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; you cannot control what goes into a
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, whenever it
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into ingredients
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high in salt and
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bad
calories
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may cause you to gain weight and expose your health to
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regularly
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have revolutionized the way that we eat. Enjoy eating at home and the process of cooking
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home cooked
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are the best option to be happier and healthier.
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IELTS essay ready meals have revolutionized eating at home but at what price

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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