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it is a well-documented fact that an increasing number of people all over the world are drawing attention to elements contributed to the success in sports. while there are some who strongly believe that physical strength is the major points for other people who want to achieved succeed in their way, others claim that mental strange is more important than physical strange. therefore this has been an endless controversial issue, and both sides of the other issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.

it is a well-documented fact that an increasing number of people all over the world are drawing attention to elements contributed to the success in sports. while there are some who strongly believe that physical strength is the major points for other people who want to achieved succeed in their way, others claim that mental strange is more important than physical strange. therefore this has been an endless controversial issue, and both sides of the other issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs. M3PBN
it is a well-documented fact that an increasing number of people all over the world are drawing attention to elements contributed to the success in sports. while there are some who strongly believe that physical strength is the major points for other people who want to achieved succeed in their way, others claim that mental strange is more important than physical strange. therefore this has been an endless controversial issue, and both sides of the other issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
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IELTS essay it is a well-documented fact that an increasing number of people all over the world are drawing attention to elements contributed to the success in sports. while there are some who strongly believe that physical strength is the major points for other people who want to achieved succeed in their way, others claim that mental strange is more important than physical strange. therefore this has been an endless controversial issue, and both sides of the other issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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