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My dream vacation will definitely come back to Quang Ninh. I visited Quang Ninh about a few years ago and absolutely loved it. When I was young, my family had a trip to Quang Ninh, about 40km from Hai Phong. The trip starts at 5am and takes about an hour to arrive. Quang Ninh has many beautiful things to attract visitors such as delicious food, beautiful scenery, and especially Ha Long Bay. Ha Long Bay is one of the seven natural wonders of the world. We ate a lot of seafood there, the food here is cheap and delicious. We go to the night market, buy gifts for friends. In addition, we also participated in many activities such as scuba diving, fishing… This trip was really interesting and left us with many good impressions of the beautiful scenery and friendly people. We will be back there soon and experience more interesting things here.
My dream vacation will definitely
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Quang
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things to attract visitors such as delicious food,
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seafood there, the food here is
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and delicious. We go to the night market,
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gifts for friends.
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activities such as scuba diving, fishing… This trip was
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really interesting
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impressions of the
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scenery and friendly
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. We will be back there
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and experience more interesting things here.
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IELTS essay writing about Your dream holiday

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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