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writing about special day

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For me all anniversaries are vital but during this year 2021 the foremost special occasion on behalf of me is January 21, 2021 at the moment is that the day my youngest brother was born. That day was the primary time I witnessed my mother biological processto a younger brother, I burst into tears as soon as my brother was born, the sensation was indescribable, mixed with joy and sadness, I'm happy to work out my brother born healthy strong but felt sorry his mother who struggled to present birth to a baby. Before that day I could not sleep I used to be so restless, anxiously waiting every minute to determine my brother welcome into the globe, I could notbelieve I used to be eighteen and that i still had a bit brother, I cried lots that day, I checked out a small baby wearing many layers, it had been so special. After I held the baby in my arms, I used to beindescribable and at that point I believed, I would like to cherish and protect him. That day isn't only special for my brother and my mother and father, but also for my whole family as we welcome a replacement friend. Now my sister is nearly a year old, very cute and healthy, but I still feel that day prefer it was yesterday.

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brother
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but
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 that day I could not sleep I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
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brother
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brother
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checked
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small
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many
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only
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brother
 and my mother and father, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 for my whole family as we welcome a replacement friend. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 my sister is nearly
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old
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but
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 feel that day prefer it was yesterday. 