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activities when I have free time

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I’m going to talk about some of my activities when I have free time. I don’t have any specific activity because what I do depends on what time and day of the week. On the weekend, when I get the time, I go out with my friends. We always have a lot of things to say to each other after a hard-working week. The coffee shop where we choose to sit and talk about our work or some stories daily and yeah it is a beautiful place to take some photos. I am a big fan of photography thus its great I’m keen on cooking. If I don’t hang out with my friends I will stay at home, make cakes with my family. I and my siblings mix flour while my parents tell stories about their youth life. It is a great help to connect members. Like most people, my family and friends need to go to work or study from Monday to Friday. Yeah, I’m the same. When I finish homework at university, I’m fond of watching films. Before turning on my computer and opening the latest movie, I make popcorn, lemon juice- my favorite cuisine. Leisure activities are really important for me to enjoin my life and relax. When I can arrange my time I’m gonna play sport to have great health.

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I’m keen on cooking. If I don’t hang out with my friends I will stay at home, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 cakes with my family. I and my siblings mix flour while my parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 stories about their youth life. It is a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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 to connect members.

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, my family and friends need to go to work or study from Monday to Friday. Yeah, I’m the same. When I finish homework at university, I’m fond of watching films. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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 turning on my computer and opening the latest movie, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 popcorn, lemon juice- my favorite cuisine. Leisure activities are really
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 for me to enjoin my life and relax. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 I can arrange my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 play sport to have great health. 