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Describe the house/flat of your dreams

Describe the house/flat of your dreams 0aY63
I have lived in a house all my life and when it was time to enter adulthood I wanted to move to a new flat. I would like my dream flat to be far from the noisy city centre, but at the same time close to the metro, 5 minutes away from home. I'm fascinated by houses that look like they came out of the 50s from the outside, so I'd like my flat to be in a restored building to feel all that vibe of the past. I would like to create a cosy atmosphere in the living room. The living room should have a TV with a plasma screen, as I really like to watch different films and anime in the evening, a black leather sofa, a white carpet and two armchairs. I would like to imagine a small entrance hall and a small staircase that leads to the kitchen and dining room. I love ceramic crockery and want the utensils to be aesthetically pleasing. I would also like the flat to have light colours, because that makes it look bigger and more spacious, although keeping it spotlessly clean would be difficult. But I think I have enough money to equip myself with modern conveniences like a robot hoover. Translated with www. DeepL. com/Translator (free version)
I have
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lived
in a
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house
all my life and when it was time to enter adulthood I wanted to
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move
to a new
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flat
. I would like my dream
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flat
to be far from the noisy city
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centre
,
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but
at the same time close to the metro, 5 minutes away from home.
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I
'm fascinated by
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houses
that look like they came out of the 50s from the outside,
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so
I'd like my
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flat
to be in a restored building to feel all that vibe of the past.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would like to create a
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cosy
atmosphere in the living room. The living room should have a TV with a plasma screen, as I
really
like to
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watch
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different
films and anime in the evening, a black leather sofa, a white carpet and two armchairs.

I would like to imagine a
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small
entrance hall and a
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small
staircase that leads to the kitchen and dining room. I
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love
ceramic crockery and want the utensils to be
aesthetically
pleasing.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
also
like the
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flat
to have light
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colours
,
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because
that
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makes
it look bigger and more spacious, although keeping it
spotlessly
clean would be difficult.
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But
I
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think
I have
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enough
money to equip myself with modern conveniences like a robot hoover.

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IELTS essay Describe the house/flat of your dreams

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
217 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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