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This morning, when I studied with Miss Khanh, she gave for me two topic, that was topic music and movie. And I found that I said smoothy and I had ideal better than, I was on cloud nine when Ms. Khanh said I was better than before a plenty of. It like inspire to I try than and it also make me fell pround myself due to I allway try pratice speak every day. At that time, internet was normal, but when I studied Chinese, you know I was outed four time and I didn’t hear what was my teacher say. That make me very angree.
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, she gave for me two
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, that was topic music and movie. And I found that I said
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smoothy
and I had ideal better than, I was on cloud nine when Ms.
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Khanh
said I was better than
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me fell
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myself due to I
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speak every day. At that time, internet was normal,
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when I studied Chinese, you know I
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four time and I didn’t hear what was my teacher say. That
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IELTS essay writing about one day of you

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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