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Describe What abou your self

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My name is rajes bakutra. You can call me by my first name rajesh. Yes mem, it is here pasport. I am come from Gandhidham, Kutch. it is a big town of a all Gujarat according to the surface area. Yes mem, I like a very much my town becouse it my birthday place and my all relative's are there. Now am taking about kutch, it's very famous for his traditional like closed women's are wearing ghagara and kamkha and man are wearing vanjna and khamis and Kutchi dabeli is very famous for all our Gujar. And our traditional bharat kam is very popular in all World. Yes, I listen to the music. Whenever i was dimpresd that time I prefer to listen music it's throughout I feal very fresh full and motivated. I have a Mobil phones, remember to me when I was pass out 12 class and I came to college that time I have. I am science student. Most of people gusase science student is very intelligent and very hardworking working person. In that field of science student must done Hard work and smart work. Science filed devided two catagory A group and B group. In that have a three subject like maths/ biolagogy, physics and chemistry.
My name is
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rajes
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bakutra
. You can call me by my
first
name
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rajesh
. Yes
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mem
, it is here
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pasport
. I am
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come
from
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Gandhidham
,
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Kutch
.
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it
is a
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big
town of
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a
all Gujarat according to the surface area. Yes
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mem
, I like a
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very
much my town
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becouse
it my birthday place and my all
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relative's
are there.
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Now
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am
taking about
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kutch
, it's
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very
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famous
for his traditional like closed women's are wearing
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ghagara
and
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kamkha
and
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man
are wearing
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vanjna
and
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khamis
and
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Kutchi
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dabeli
is
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very
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famous
for all our
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Gujar
. And our traditional
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bharat
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kam
is
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very
popular in all World. Yes, I listen to the music. Whenever
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i
was
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dimpresd
that time I prefer to listen music it's throughout I
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feal
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very
fresh full and motivated. I have a Mobil phones, remember to me when I was pass out 12
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class
and I came to college that time I have. I am
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science
student. Most of
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people
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gusase
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science
student is
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very
intelligent and
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very
hardworking working person. In that field of
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science
student
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must
Did you mean "have done" or "do"?
done
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Hard
work and smart work.
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Science
filed
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devided
two
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catagory
A group and B group. In that have a three subject like
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maths
/
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biolagogy
, physics and chemistry.

IELTS essay Describe What abou your self

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
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