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Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than small shops or local markets ? Is this positive or negative for developement ? Discuss and give your opinion.

Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for developement? Discuss and give your opinion. rK2wn
Supermarkets have become so popular in today's world that every individual prefer to shop their daily needs from it. It is really very convenient for the people to shop from the gignatic markets. In this era, Virtual shopping plays an important role for the human beings and makes their lives easier. Small shops or local markets are also an vital part in day to day activities. Emporiums in this globe has got several benefits for the society such as, It offers various varieties of things which is precisely mentioned in the market. Major amount of discounts are availed for the consumers to make them feel ecstatic. It is inexpensive comparitivevly to tiny shops. It has got products which cannot be found in small shops. Moreover, it has got proper management and several facilities such as escalators, Air conditioned stores and other things. Furthermore, it gives coupons to the customers to avail discounts for future shopping. If all the people of the world would prefer to shop from malls, It would directly affect chain stores and their owners. A person would become depressed if they do not earn from selling their products. Thus, it would reduce the economy and the globalization would suffer from lot of unemployement problems. Perhaps, chain stores would suffer from parking problems and crowd issues. To cite an example, If an individual needs to buy a thing or two they won't to go big markets to shop. They would prefer chain stores to purchase their products from it. At some extent, I firmly believe emporiums play an important role in a part of developement of the urbanisation.
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their daily needs from it. It is
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markets. In this era, Virtual shopping plays an
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important
role for the human beings and
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makes
their
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lives
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shops
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vital part in day to day activities.

Emporiums in this globe has
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several benefits for the society such as, It offers various varieties of things which is
precisely
mentioned in the
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market
. Major amount of discounts
are availed
for the consumers to
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make
them feel ecstatic. It is inexpensive
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comparitivevly
to tiny
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shops
. It has
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got
products which cannot
be found
in
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small
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shops
.
Moreover
, it has
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got
proper management and several facilities such as escalators, Air conditioned
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stores
and other things.
Furthermore
, it gives coupons to the customers to avail discounts for future shopping.

If all the
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people
of the world would prefer to
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shop
from malls, It would
directly
affect chain
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stores
and their owners. A person would become depressed if they do not earn from selling their products.
Thus
, it would
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reduce
the economy and the globalization would suffer from
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lot of
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unemployement
problems. Perhaps, chain
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stores
would suffer from parking problems and crowd issues. To cite an example, If an individual needs to
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buy
a thing or two they won't to go
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big
markets to
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shop
. They would prefer chain
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stores
to
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purchase
their products from it.

At
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some
extent, I
firmly
believe emporiums play an
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important
role in a part of
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developement
of the
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urbanisation
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarkets rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for developement? Discuss and give your opinion.

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