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I love traditional food of Vietnam. In the morning, I usually have breafast with traditional food such as Pho, Banh mi, etc. I like Pho best, because it’s really delicous. People make Pho by rice flour and make to noodle. They’re cook soup by cow bone in a few hours. Not only that but aslo in bowl have beef slices and onions. A blowl Pho will provide enough power before I start stying. I always Pho at the small shop on the road, because it’s cheaper than large shop. But smell not change. Pho not only popular on the country, but aslo a dish is famous on the wold. Toursist from other country always enjoy when come here.
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power
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IELTS essay writing about my favourite food

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  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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