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topic talk about your leisure time

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Hi everyone, I’m Minh Anh. Well, you know work and study are the nerve-racking part of our lives. I'm always overwhelmed with tons of meeting online and deadlines, so it makes me feel tired. I need to blow off some steam. When I have free time, I usually keep it low-key. My parents think I'm quite a bit of a couch potato. I will do different things for a different time period. Most of the time I take a keen interest in makeup. I spend 15 minutes to read, I have a big bookshelf with many kinds of books but I prefer novels. Recently, I would love to have a crack at bake a cake. Although it looks ugly, I’m still happy. I think I used my free time reasonably well. How about you?
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things for a
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period. Most of the
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I take a keen interest in makeup. I spend 15 minutes to read, I have a
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big
bookshelf with
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kinds of books
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I prefer novels. Recently, I would
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to have a crack at bake a cake. Although it looks ugly, I’m
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IELTS essay topic talk about your leisure time

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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