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Writing about how to cook a traditional dish

Writing about how to cook a traditional dish LLMe1

As you know, there are lots of different traditional food in Viet Nam and yellow sticky rice is one of them. To make it is not hard if you know how to make it. First of all, you have to need 500g of sticky rice; three tbsp extract of turmeric, a cup of shredded coconut and ¼ tsp of salt. Then you soak sticky rice in water at least 5 hours, after that, you rinse rice and drain it. Besides that, you mix well turmeric extract and wait for 10 min. Next, you add coconut and salt and mix well all of them. In addition, you steam it for 30 min and check cooked. Finally, you serve it with some ingredients and enjoy! ! !

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