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Suppose, some foreigners want to visit your country for one day. What you will recommend them to visit your country for one day.

Suppose, some foreigners want to visit your country for one day. What you will recommend them to visit your country for one day. NwbEj
My country has several sightseeing and tourist attraction places it really worth to visit them. From my standpoint, I would strongly recommend foreigners to see historic sites of capital city Baku. First and foremost, there are many historical monuments which, they have a breathtaking view. One of them is a Maiden Tower locates exactly in the western side of Caspian Sea. That depicts, how human civilizations were originated this castle and settled around it. Additionally, Despite Baku is one of the most vital cities of Azerbaijan but, there are a few run-down areas reflect the attack of foreign invaders to Azerbaijan. Tourists can organize a guided tour there and they can get around easily. Apart from that, they will have an opportunity to take advantage of staying in luxury hotels by making a reservation in advance. In conclusion, I am pretty sure that historical sites of Baku will be unforgettable for foreigners.
My country has
Possible agreement error. The noun sightseeing seems to be uncountable; consider using: "some sightseeing".
several sightseeing
and tourist attraction places it
really
worth to visit them. From my standpoint, I would
strongly
recommend foreigners to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
historic sites of capital city Baku.

First
and foremost, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
historical monuments which, they have a breathtaking view. One of them is a Maiden Tower locates exactly in the western side
A determiner is probably missing here: "of the Caspian Sea".
of Caspian Sea
. That depicts, how human civilizations
were originated
this castle and settled around it.

Additionally
, Despite Baku is one of the most vital cities of Azerbaijan
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
, there are a few run-down areas reflect the attack of foreign invaders to Azerbaijan. Tourists can organize a guided tour
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
there and
they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
around
easily
. Apart from that, they will have an opportunity to take advantage of staying in luxury hotels by making a reservation in advance.

In conclusion
, I am pretty sure that historical sites of Baku will be unforgettable for foreigners.
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IELTS essay Suppose, some foreigners want to visit your country for one day. What you will recommend them to visit your country for one day.

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