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solving deforestation problem

solving deforestation problem B7219
using paper and wood in different industries made deforestation to happen faster. it takes many years for a tree to thrive. so soon there will be serious problems such as erosion, loss of many species of animals, and air pollution. one way to stop logging or at least reduce its speed is to use less paper. we use paper for learning, advertising, cleaning, and et. for learning, digital devices like laptops, smart phones and tablets can be a good replacement for paper.
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paper and wood in
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industries made deforestation to happen faster.
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takes
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years for a tree to thrive.
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so
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soon
there will be serious problems such as erosion, loss of
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many
species of animals, and air pollution.
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one
way to
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logging or at least
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reduce
its speed is to
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use
less paper.
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we
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use
paper for learning, advertising, cleaning, and
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. for learning, digital devices like laptops, smart phones and tablets can be a
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replacement for paper.

IELTS essay solving deforestation problem

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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