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A day in the desert-paragraph

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Last week, we had a fantastic trip to the desert. First, before we went, we prepared for our lunch. Then we were searching for a convenient location. After that, we started cooking Kabsah while my brothers were playing football. That kabsah was the most delicious lunch I ever had. At night we made Arabic coffee with some sweat. We spent beautiful time with each other through the day. Eventually that was memorable trip.

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 time with each other through the day. Eventually
 that was memorable trip. 