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In the fourth week, teacher Rocko came up with a well-organized PowerPoint about report writing. I’ve learned how to construct a report with a proper layout. I was given a report to work on after this class. My topic was about the effect of misleading advertisements. I’m quite interested in this topic. Thus, I put a great effort into researching information and brainstormed for my first draft. The community consists of each individual living as a group in the same environment. Each of us has different perceptions, ideas, feelings, and thoughts, hence conflicts are inevitable. At the half of the semester, I was taught a lecture related to conflict management and negotiation. In this lecture, my teacher explained different types of behavior related to various types of conflicts. He demonstrates that the main idea is to be assertive and always search for the best solution that solves the problem. Not only solving the problem is crucial. There are complicated situations occasionally, I couldn’t take sides easily. In this situation, negotiation methods are necessary. What inspired me the most was the vowel model from additional tips, it can work out conflicts at different levels in an organization. In the sixth week, I studied a new lesson which is referencing. Knowing how to reference is the basic 'skill' needed in a university. It helps avoid plagiarism by acknowledging the work of others. I was quite confused after learning the ‘theories’ from the guidebook, however, after practicing with 10 examples I understood the overall steps in referencing. By week seven, the teacher gave a presentation about cover letters and emails. He explained the details that are required in cover letters. In order to construct a professional cover letter, the AIDA formula is notably useful. AIDA formula is also effective in setting up an appealing advertisement. Starting from this week, we were given one lecture per week and another period was the time for me to work on the report, it was also an opportunity given for asking questions if anything is confusing about the report and presentation. This ‘working’ period was helpful for me since I can use this time to research my topic. The second last week was a class related to curriculum vitae and resume. Building up a well-planned resume can catch the hirer’s attention; hence an eye-catching resume can get a faster reply from a company. After this lecture, I had a basic understanding of the elements in a professional curriculum vitae. I wrote my CV to know more about it. Teacher Rocko mentioned that I did great at building up a professional resume including all necessary elements and gave compliment on my CV. Among all the lectures given, what impressed me the most was the chapter explained the last week, about oral communication which is also called ‘presentation’. This lecture includes the preparation section, the setting and context, visual aids, and a few tips for the final presentation. I made a list that summarizes several useful tips from this chapter. According to all the information, I started to focus on the preparation section. Preparation is the main key that can directly influence the performance of the final presentation. During the presentation, it is necessary to maintain a proper posture throughout the presentation along with appropriate body language which expresses confidence while explaining the topic. In this case, teacher Rocko suggested we use gestures such as ‘coffee cup’. It is essential to use positive gestures in order to develop the interest level of audiences. After this class, I was able to figure out how should a professional presentation look like. Besides, I gained more confidence in preparing, together with presenting the information. Hopefully, I will be able to perform better in my upcoming presentations.
In the fourth
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,
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teacher
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Rocko
came up with a well-organized PowerPoint about
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report
writing. I’ve learned how to construct a
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report
with a proper layout. I was
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given
a
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report
to
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work
on after this
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class
. My topic was about the effect of misleading advertisements. I’m quite interested in this topic.
Thus
, I put a great effort into researching information and brainstormed for my
first
draft.

The community consists of each individual living as a group in the same environment. Each of us has
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different
perceptions,
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ideas
, feelings, and thoughts,
hence
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conflicts
are inevitable. At the half of the semester, I
was taught
a
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lecture
related to
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conflict
management and negotiation. In this
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lecture
, my
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teacher
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explained
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different
types of behavior related to various types of
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conflicts
. He demonstrates that the main
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
is to be assertive and always search for the best solution that solves the problem. Not
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only
solving the problem is crucial. There
are complicated
situations
occasionally
, I couldn’t take sides
easily
. In this situation, negotiation methods are necessary. What inspired me the most was the vowel model from additional tips, it can
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work
out
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conflicts
at
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different
levels in an organization.

In the sixth
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week
, I studied a new lesson which is referencing. Knowing how to reference is the basic '
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
' needed in a university. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
avoid plagiarism by acknowledging the
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work
of others. I was quite confused after learning the ‘theories’ from the guidebook,
however
, after practicing with 10 examples I understood the
overall
steps in referencing.

By
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week
seven, the
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teacher
gave a
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presentation
about cover letters and emails. He
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
the
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details
that
are required
in cover letters. In order to construct a
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professional
cover letter, the AIDA formula is
notably
useful. AIDA formula is
also
effective in setting up an appealing advertisement. Starting from this
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week
, we were
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given
one
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lecture
per
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week
and another period was the time for me to
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work
on the
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report
, it was
also
an opportunity
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given
for asking questions if anything is confusing about the
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report
and
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presentation
. This ‘working’ period was helpful for me since I can
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use
this time to research my topic.

The second last
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week
was a
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class
related to curriculum vitae and
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resume
. Building up a well-planned
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resume
can catch the
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hirer
’s attention;
hence
an eye-catching
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resume
can
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get
a faster reply from a
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company
. After this
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lecture
, I had a basic understanding of the elements in a
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professional
curriculum vitae. I wrote my CV to know more about it.
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Teacher
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Rocko
mentioned that I did great at building up a
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professional
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resume
including all necessary elements and gave compliment on my CV.

Among all the
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lectures
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
, what impressed me the most was the chapter
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
the last
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week
, about oral communication which is
also
called
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‘presentation’
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lecture
includes the preparation section, the setting and context, visual aids, and a few tips for the final
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
. I made a list that summarizes several useful tips from this chapter. According to all the information, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to focus on the preparation section. Preparation is the main key that can
directly
influence the performance of the final
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
. During the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
, it is necessary to maintain a proper posture throughout the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
along with appropriate body language which expresses confidence while explaining the topic.
In this case
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teacher
Possible spelling mistake found.
Rocko
suggested we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
gestures such as ‘coffee cup’. It is essential to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
gestures in order to develop the interest level of audiences. After this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
, I was able to figure out how should a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
professional
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
look like.
Besides
, I gained more confidence in preparing, together with presenting the information.
Hopefully
, I will be able to perform better in my upcoming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentations
.
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IELTS essay Write your reflective essay, explain in details.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
624 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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