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write your opinion of a shop in the area and include the price, quality and service

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It is a mini-market where you can buy many things at the cheapest price. In this market you can buy everything, you can also try to convince the owner to take the product of your choice to the mini-market, but you have to have people who agree with your idea. The products are of good quality, in any case, if you have problems with the products, the staff will definitely help you immediately. The difference in the service of this establishment is that the staff do not insist too much and you do not have to deal with these stressful situations. I would recommend this mini-market to anyone who likes to save money, it also has a good atmosphere to feel relaxed and buy without worries.
It is a mini-market where you can
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buy
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many
things at the cheapest price.

In this market you can
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buy
everything, you can
also
try to convince the owner to take the product of your choice to the mini-market,
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but
you
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have to
have
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people
who
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agree
with your
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idea
.

The products are of
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good
quality, in any case, if you have problems with the products, the staff will definitely
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help
you immediately. The difference in the service of this establishment is that the staff do not insist too much and you do not
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have to
deal with these stressful situations.

I would recommend this mini-market to anyone who likes to save money, it
also
has a
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good
atmosphere to feel relaxed and
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without worries.
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IELTS essay write your opinion of a shop in the area and include the price, quality and service

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  American English
4 paragraphs
126 words
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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