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The trader The distributor is a supermarket where you can buy many things at a discount on a plethora of products. In this supermarket you can buy everything, you can also write suggestions for the owner to take the product of your choice to the supermarket, but you have to have a certain number of people who agree with your idea. The products are of good quality, in any case, if you have problems with the products, the staff will definitely help you immediately. The difference in the service of this establishment is that the staff do not insist too much and you do not have to deal with these stressful situations. I would recommend this supermarket to anyone who likes to save money, it also has a good atmosphere to feel relaxed and buy without worries.
The trader

The distributor is a supermarket where you can
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buy
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many
things at a discount on a plethora of products.

In this supermarket you can
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buy
everything, you can
also
write suggestions for the owner to take the product of your choice to the supermarket,
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but
you
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have to
have a certain number of
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people
who
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agree
with your
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idea
.

The products are of
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good
quality, in any case, if you have problems with the products, the staff will definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you immediately. The difference in the service of this establishment is that the staff do not insist too much and you do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
deal with these stressful situations.

I would recommend this supermarket to anyone who likes to save money, it
also
has a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
atmosphere to feel relaxed and
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buy
without worries.
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IELTS essay talk about a supermarket in your area

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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