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I still remember when I was in third grade, in the closing ceremony of awarding students with excellent team performance, I received a photo of Uncle Ho wearing a scarf for a team member. It is a gift that means a lot to me. The picture was not very large, about forty centimetres long, about thirty centimetres wide. The picture frame is made of light yellow painted wood. Trembling with the photograph in my hand, I could smell the scent of new wood and varnish. The face of the photo frame is a transparent, very thick mirror. Behind the picture frame is a piece of wood cut to fit the frame. The four rear corners are four screws to adjust the mirror and wood pieces to fit together. The most important is the photo in the frame. It was a picture of Uncle Ho wearing a scarf for a child. Uncle wore simple, familiar white khaki clothes. His hair turned white. Uncle is looking at the little friend with eyes full of pride and love. A friendly smile bloomed on his lips. The child in the photo is wearing a white shirt and skirt uniform. Two braids were neatly braided on both sides. The scarf Uncle is wearing on your shoulder makes the picture meaningful. At the bottom of the photo frame stands out the red text: "Ho Chi Minh Pioneer Youth Team" It's just an ordinary picture. Simple but it is a meaningful gift, not only for me but also for everyone who has experienced childhood and adolescence.
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remember when I was in third grade, in the closing ceremony of awarding students with excellent team performance, I received a
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Ho wearing a scarf for a team member. It is a gift that means a lot to me.

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was not
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large, about forty
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wide. The
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is made
of light yellow painted
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wood
. Trembling with the photograph in my hand, I could smell the scent of new
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wood
and varnish. The face of the
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photo
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is a transparent,
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thick mirror. Behind the
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is a piece of
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. The four rear corners are four screws to adjust the mirror and
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pieces to fit together. The most
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in the
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. It was a
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of
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Ho wearing a scarf for a child.
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wore simple, familiar white khaki clothes. His hair turned white.
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is looking at the
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friend with eyes full of pride and
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. A friendly smile bloomed on his lips. The child in the
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is wearing a white shirt and skirt uniform. Two braids were
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is wearing on your shoulder
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meaningful. At the bottom of the
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stands out the red text:
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Ho Chi Minh Pioneer Youth Team
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for everyone who has experienced childhood and adolescence.
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IELTS essay describe an object is special to you

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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