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I usually wake up at 7a. m every day and do exercise and have a breakfast, however today I am staying in university and waiting my teacher give my a dissertation. Yertesday, my techer called to me and said tomorrow i want you come to school and receive a dissertation and this the reason why am i sitting in university. I am going to visit my friend when i receive the dissertation, but now too late for me can do that.

I usually
 wake up at 7a. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterM
m
 every day and do exercise and When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: "have breakfast".have breakfast
have a breakfast
, however
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 I am staying in university and You are missing the word "to" before the infinitive form "give". Did you mean "waiting my teacher to give"?waiting my teacher to give
waiting my teacher give
 my a dissertation. Possible spelling mistake found.Yesterday
Yertesday
, my Possible spelling mistake found.teachertetheretcherlechertech er
techer
 called to me and said tomorrow Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to school and receive a dissertation and this the reason why am Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 sitting in university. I am going to visit my friend when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 receive the dissertation, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 too late for me can do that. 

IELTS essay write what do you do normall and what do you do at the moment

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

81 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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