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Customer complaint letter to a showroom manager as the sales personal improper conduct.

Customer complaint letter to a showroom manager as the sales personal improper conduct. Vwrw7

Dear Sir, This is Kanes, from ACB Company. I would like to bring it to your notice, a bad experience i had with your showroom on 14 October 2021. We dropped in your outlet to check a Samsung TV on current promotions. We approached a sales personal, called Martin at your sales place. He was very rude in manner and did not gave any information we requested and he mentioned he was busy in arranging other promotional items. Meanwhile, we saw his he was talking to other customers and explaining the product. The company should ensure to hire people who are friendly and able to handle all the customers need and not based on their identity. I strongly show my grivences on this matter and should he advise to be friendly and know to respect the customers. Your sincerely, Kanes

Dear Sir,

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