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Playing sport is necessary because it brings about physical strength and mental power to the person. Sport consists of many different sports such as swimming, football, badminton, volleyball, basketball, etc. I quite like playing badminton. Badminton is a very easy game, everyone can play it. You can play it anywhere with rackets and a shuttlecock. That’s why, I’m taking badminton as one of my hobby
Playing sport is necessary
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because
it brings about physical strength and mental power to the person. Sport consists of
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many
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different
sports such as swimming, football, badminton, volleyball, basketball, etc. I quite like playing badminton. Badminton is a
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very
easy game, everyone can play it. You can play it anywhere with rackets and a shuttlecock. That’s why, I’m taking badminton as one of my
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hobby
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IELTS essay write to the sports and thei benefits

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
64 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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