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My family is a nuclear family. There are four people in my family: my parents, me and my younger brother. My father is a hard worker, he always works away from home. Because of Covid 19, he can't come back home so we miss him very much. My mother is a warm housewife, she understands the emotional problems of adolescents. While my father goes out to work, she does housework, cooks meals, and takes care of their children. My younger brother studies at a high school. Because he is an adolescents boy, sometimes he made me feel angry by his stupid thinking. I hope he will become more mature in the future. About me, I am eighteen years old and I am studying at Hust. We like to spend time together. After having dinner, we sit together in the living room, talking and watching television. I think it's meaningful and fun. We love each other and I'm happy to be alive in my family.

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: my parents, me and my younger brother. My father is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
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 much. My mother is a warm housewife, she understands the emotional problems of adolescents. While my father goes out to work, she does housework, cooks meals, and takes care of their children. My younger brother studies at a high school. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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. We like to spend time together. After having dinner, we sit together in the living room, talking and watching television. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it's meaningful and fun. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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family
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