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my favorite type of holiday

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Hi, my name is Ta Thu Giang. I want to talk about my favorite type of holiday. Last year, during summer vacation, I got to travel with my family on a Sam Son beach in Thanh Hoa in the South of Vietnam. I traveled for four or five days because I did not have much time. My family had a resort for the holiday. It was a little expensive but the quality of service was excellent. So I felt happy and comfortable. My parents and I spent all the morning sightseeing the beautiful view, taking anniversaries photos and visiting famous places. At lunch, I had a taste of seafood and swam in the pool. The next day, I had a sunbathe and went to the water park. I was excited to have time with my family on holiday. It was a wonderful trip.
Hi, my name is Ta Thu
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. I want to talk about my favorite type of holiday. Last year, during summer vacation, I
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to travel with my family on a Sam Son beach in Thanh
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in the South of Vietnam. I traveled for four or five days
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I did not have much time. My family had a resort for the holiday. It was a
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little
expensive
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but
the quality of service was excellent.
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I felt happy and comfortable. My parents and I spent all the morning sightseeing the
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beautiful
view, taking anniversaries photos and visiting
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famous
places. At lunch, I had a taste of seafood and swam in the pool. The
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day, I had
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a sunbathe
and went to the water park. I
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to have time with my family on holiday. It was a wonderful trip.
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IELTS essay my favorite type of holiday

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143 words
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