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Greetings for the day Appreciate your prompt guidance and quick response I am excited to tell you that I have accepted my offer letter for the position of Associate Data Scientist and ecstatic to be part of the shell. Without your help during the hiring process, I would not have had learned so much about the company. Thanks for providing a wonderful opportunity to flourish my career and know-how. I look forward to commence my employment on 03-JAN-2021. If there is any additional information or paperwork you need prior to then please let me know.
Greetings for the day

Appreciate your prompt guidance and quick response

I
am excited
to
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tell
you that I have
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accepted
my offer letter for the position of Associate Data Scientist and ecstatic to be part of the shell. Without your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
during the hiring process, I would not have had learned
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Thanks for providing a wonderful opportunity to flourish my career and know-how.

I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to commencing".
to commence
my employment on 03-JAN-2021. If there is any additional information or paperwork you need prior to then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know.

IELTS essay write to Accepting the offer letter

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
95 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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