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Vegetarianism is considered to be more ethical practice

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because
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consump
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at
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shulter
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moeat
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dismission
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happen which is a heinous crime and it should be
strictly
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prohi
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animals
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meat
eaters do not and it is better
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practice
to be a vegetarian! 135 #
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IELTS essay Vegetarianism is considered to be more ethical practice

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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