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Write the corrections for the numbered highlighted words/phrases. dly9P
(11) Todays technologies enable us to read (12) book on electronic devices and what's more, we can store hundreds of thousands of books on devices like Amazon's kindle e-readers. This makes some people (13) to believe that people will stop printing books and in the future, everything will be digitalized. Electronic books and newspapers have many advantages. They are easy to use and reach. They can be stored in computers, mobiles, e-readers and in cloud (14) in huge amounts and are available at any time. The cost of manufacturing and printing is completely removed, which (15) reduced their price. Digital books and newspapers also have one very important advantage - they are environmentally friendly. No paper is used to print magazines and books, which means less trees are cut from our forests to produce papers. All of these factors convince many people that digital versions of books and magazines is (16) more convenient, ethical and cheaper choice. On the other hand, traditional printed books and magazines have existed for centuries and believe they have created some kind of emotional connection and value for people. When a man reads a book and he likes it, he (17) most probably would like to have it in a form of a tangible thing. Books are a form of art, like statues and paintings. You can have a picture of some famous paintings, but the paintings themselves have some intangible value. Magazines and newspapers do not have such a value in themselves. Based on this, I believe that (18) the amount of books are printed will decrease considerably and maybe even dramatically (19), however printed, tangible books will still be demanded by many people as they have some aura and value in addition to the things that are written inside. do think, though, that there is a big chance magazines and newspapers will move into the online world completely. This is because they are published in huge numbers daily and weekly and monthly and no one needs them after years. Printing (20) so huge amount of articles will demand additional resources and make them less competitive even in terms of price.
(11)
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Todays
technologies enable us to read (12)
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book
on electronic devices and what's more, we can store hundreds of thousands of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
on devices like Amazon's kindle e-readers. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
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some
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people
(13) to believe that
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people
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
printing
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books
and in the future, everything will
be digitalized
.

Electronic
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books
and
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newspapers
have
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many
advantages. They are easy to
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use
and reach. They can
be stored
in computers, mobiles, e-readers and in cloud (14) in huge amounts and are available at any time. The cost of manufacturing and printing is completely removed, which (15)
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
their price. Digital
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books
and
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newspapers
also
have one
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
advantage
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
they are
environmentally
friendly. No paper is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to print
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magazines
and
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books
, which means
Did you mean "fewer"? The noun trees is countable.
less
trees are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
from our forests to produce papers. All of these factors convince
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
that digital versions of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazines
is (16) more convenient, ethical and cheaper choice.

On the other hand
, traditional printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazines
have existed for centuries and believe they have created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
kind of emotional connection and
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value
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. When a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
reads a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
book and
he likes it, he (17) most
probably
would like to have it in a form of a tangible thing.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Books
are a form of art, like statues and paintings. You can have a picture of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
paintings,
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but
the paintings themselves have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
intangible
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value
.
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Magazines
and
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newspapers
do not have such a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
value
in themselves.

Based on this, I believe that (18) the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "is"? (Some collective nouns can be treated as both singular and plural, so 'are' is not always incorrect.)
are
printed will decrease
considerably
and maybe even
dramatically
(19),
however
printed, tangible
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books
will
still
be demanded
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
as they have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
aura and
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value
in addition
to the things that
are written
inside.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
, though, that there is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
chance
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazines
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
into the online world completely. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
are published
in huge numbers daily and weekly and monthly and no one needs them after years. Printing (20)
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
huge amount of articles will demand additional resources and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them less competitive even in terms of price.
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IELTS essay Write the corrections for the numbered highlighted words/phrases.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
357 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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