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The biggest change and the biggest advantage of the internet of communication system very simple. people can contact each other for free. with a good internet connection people can play games and read blogs and online newspapers. the internet connects people from all over the world and it become easy to work from home. many companies run their operation from home. it has made it easier for people to make money and make a living.
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and the biggest advantage of the internet of communication system
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people
can contact each other for free.
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with
a
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good
internet connection
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people
can play games and read blogs and online newspapers.
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the
internet connects
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people
from all over the world and it
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become
easy to work from home.
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many
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companies
run their operation from home.
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it
has made it easier for
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people
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IELTS essay write the advantage of internet

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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