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What is importance of happiness in life? What factors are more important?

What is importance of happiness in life? What factors are more important? ebm17
In the modern society, feel happy are also essential as light food for living. In this essay, I will discuss some biotic factors that a help you to achieve happiness. In the world, no body no how to we train describe happy feeling reason is that the measurement of happy modes are different from person to person. That is why, we would not reach the result of happiness. There are some factors with the support of them we can get happiness. It is true that without happiness the survival in the life will be difficult. First and foremost, we said some activities during them we can feel happy in our life. For instance, some individuals have interest in gaming when they play their own interest game then they feel pleased. Another is that social works; due to this visit at the range of enjoy doing that sort of tasks. For example, if a person stops help to disabled for aged citizen. These people when give prays for him. At that moment, he have no words to say thanks. Lastly, work done in international level no one before did then also achieve happiness. To ample, if a student make anti-virus of covid-19. This as beneficial for Globes because currently in not a single scientist introduce antivirus that is his big achievement for his whole life. To sum up, without of enjoyment we life have nothing that is why we should on that aspects doing them we feel glad. I have explain the possible factors help to achieving the happiness for life.
In the modern society,
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feel
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happy
are
also
essential as light food for living. In this essay, I will discuss
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some
biotic factors that a
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help
you to achieve happiness.

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In
the world,
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no body
no how to we train
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describe
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happy
feeling reason is that the measurement of
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happy
modes are
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different
from person to person.
That is
why, we would not reach the result of
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happiness
. There are
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some
factors with the support of them we can
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get
happiness.

It is true that without
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happiness
the survival in the
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life
will be difficult.
First
and foremost, we said
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some
activities during them we can
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feel
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happy
in our
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life
.
For instance
,
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some
individuals have interest in gaming when they play their
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own
interest game then they
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feel
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pleased
. Another is that social works; due to this visit at the range of enjoy doing that sort of tasks.
For example
, if a person
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stops
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help
to disabled for aged citizen. These
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people
when give prays for him. At that moment, he
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have
no words to say thanks.

Lastly
, work done in international level no one
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before
did then
also
achieve
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happiness
. To ample, if a student
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make
anti-virus of
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covid-19
. This as beneficial for Globes
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because
currently
in not a single scientist introduce antivirus
that is
his
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big
achievement for his whole life.

To sum up, without of enjoyment we
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life
have nothing
that is
why we should on that aspects doing them we
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feel
glad. I have
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explain
the possible factors
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to achieving the
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happiness
for
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life
.
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IELTS essay What is importance of happiness in life? What factors are more important?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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