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Nowadays, Importance of traditional newspapers and magazines are reduced by modern technology with their advanced features. I totally agree with this statement. To begin with, There is a range of reasons that why ebooks are important than papers. Firstly, Internet is very easy to use anywhere, anytime. People can access any time either in leisure time or work time. It provides the information in an audio and visual format, So everyone understands in the easiest way. Secondly, When it comes to information access, People can access search any kind of information on it without any trouble. Public can store their data for long time on there devices. Moving further, the another interesting thing is that it also convenient for people. People can save their time and money also no need of people to visit at newspapers and magazines store to buy it. It can be buy online at their home. For example, During Covid-19, Everyone was stuck at home but digital media was not. Everyone use this type of media in their life that time. Moreover, it connect us to with latest news or trends or worldy affairs. To conclude, Ebooks as digital media content provides better, latest and fast information for people in a convenient way.
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anywhere, anytime.
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time
either in leisure
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time
or work
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time
. It provides the
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information
in an audio and visual format,
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everyone understands in the easiest way.
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, When it
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information
access,
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can access search any kind of
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information
on it without any trouble. Public can store their data for long
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time
on
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devices.

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further
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also
convenient for
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people
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to visit at newspapers and magazines store to
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online at their home.
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was stuck
at home
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digital media was not. Everyone
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use
this type of media in their life that
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time
.
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, it
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connect
us to with
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latest
news or trends or
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worldy
affairs.

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,
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as digital media content provides better, latest and
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people
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in a convenient way
.
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IELTS essay Importance of traditional newspapers and magazines are reduced by

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
207 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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