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Write sentences to answer the questions: about exercise Do you like to exercise? How often do you exercise? When you exercise, do you prefer exercising at a gym or outside? Why? Write about the kinds of activities you like to do for exercise.

Write sentences to answer the questions: about exercise Do you like to exercise? How often do you exercise? When you exercise, do you prefer exercising at a gym or outside? Why? Write about the kinds of activities you like to do for exercise. 9QjJX
The exercise is the best part of day for me when I do it It’s took 2h from my day routine The best time for me when I exercise at the morning or early of morning to with cup of coffe and walk outdoor make me refresh’s and make warm up for my new days and my new event that coming I think if you wanna try exercise am gonna give you punsh of advice and workouts that maybe to help you The walk it’s really really so good had benefits on it its save your heart from cardio that maybe effected on you and make you feel refresh on the day and clear your maind You had also ride a bike and go to the supermarket get some drink or snack while you’re hear some music and live I think is good experience that you can had If you don’t like that you can clean your house I know is boring but its make your body move so you can feel less lazy and be so active in your live as I was say the walking is really good as cardio to do it just walk 30 min in a day and every weak start to add more time like 5 min that make you feel good and its not matter if you workout in home or outdoors or in gym just make your body move feel the energy that could make you feel calm and who’s know maybe you can mate a new friends outdoors and make a new ship with themes And its save your body and your health and protect your heart Don’t minimize that to your self because the world is developing so you should develop your self and be healthy to follow the world development
The exercise is the best part of day for me when I do
It seems you either mean "if it", "it" or there is a comma missing: "it, it".
it It
’s took 2h from my day routine

The best time for me when I exercise
The usual preposition for "morning" is "in" not "at". Revise: "in the morning".
at the morning
or early of morning to with cup of
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coffe
and walk outdoor
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make
me refresh’s and
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make
warm up for my
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new
days and my
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new
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event
that coming

I
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think
if you
The word 'wanna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
wanna
try exercise am
The word 'gonna' is informal. Consider an alternative.
gonna
give you
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punsh
of advice and workouts that maybe to
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help
you

The walk it’s
really
really
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so
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good
had benefits on it its save your heart from cardio that maybe effected on you and
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make
you
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feel
refresh on the day and
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clear
your
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maind


You had
also
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ride
a bike and go to the supermarket
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get
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some
drink or snack while you’re
Consider using a past participle here: "heard".
hear
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some
music and
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live
I
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think
is
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good
experience that you can
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "have"
had


If you don’t like that you can clean your
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house
I know is boring
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but
its
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make
your body
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move
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so
you can
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feel
less lazy and be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
active in your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
as I was say the walking is
really
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good
as cardio to do it
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just
walk 30 min in a day and every weak
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
more time like 5 min that
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make
you
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feel
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good
and its not matter if
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'you'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
you workout
in home or outdoors or in gym
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just
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make
your body
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move
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feel
the energy that could
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feel
calm and
Did you mean "whose know"?
who’s know
maybe you can mate a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
friends outdoors and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
ship with themes

And its save your body and your health and protect your heart

Don’t minimize that to your self
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because
the world is developing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you should develop your self and be healthy to follow the world development
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IELTS essay Write sentences to answer the questions: about exercise Do you like to exercise? How often do you exercise? When you exercise, do you prefer exercising at a gym or outside? Why? Write about the kinds of activities you like to do for exercise.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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