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Advantages and disadvantages of the mordern cities

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In the modern scenario, everything has been changed significantly here are often roads of a better quality and well-built houses in urban areas. Transport facilities are highly developed and often receive regular funding for updates. . . . Due to better public transport, you can save money on a car. Most amenities and entertainments are easy to reach. It allows people to travel to different points of the city at cheaper price and it saves the environment. Modern technology helps people to communicate faster and easier. I think that in the city there are more job opportunities than in the countryside. In the city there are more jobs than in the countryside.
In the modern scenario, everything has been
changed
significantly
here are
often
roads of a better quality and well-built
houses
in urban areas.

Transport facilities are
highly
developed and
often
receive regular funding for updates.
.
.
.


Due to better public transport, you can save money on a car.

Most amenities and entertainments are easy to reach. It
allows
people
to travel to
different
points of the city at cheaper price and it saves the environment. Modern technology
helps
people
to communicate faster and easier. I
think
that in the city there are more job opportunities than in the countryside. In the city there are more jobs than in the countryside.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of the mordern cities

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  American English
4 paragraphs
112 words
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