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I can offer you several movies but I want to describe the best movie that I have ever seen. You will love it; however, it is philosophical and sort of sophisticated, therefore it makes someone not like it. Alphaville is about modern world and how it affects on human life. You can see modern thought in life. You, it is important because it changed life style. Actually, in modern time you can see that emotion wasn’t considered by postmodern. For instance, the movie shows that people don’t care to each other’s. The most important point is a lot of human values is removed; therefore, humans have been converted rotators. robots. Every person, who has conscience, is killed. If you cry, you will commit a crime. However, you can see this situation will be disturbed by 2 people at the end of the movie. In reality you can approximately see this condition in every country that are controlled by dictators. In the end, I think we should watch films like Alphaville since they make us to have better mind.
I can offer you several movies
but
I want to
describe
the best movie that I have ever
seen
. You will
love
it;
however
, it is philosophical and sort of sophisticated,
therefore
it
makes
someone not like it.

Alphaville
is about modern world and how it affects on human life. You can
see
modern
thought
in life. You, it is
important
because
it
changed
life style. Actually, in modern time you can
see
that emotion wasn’t considered by postmodern.
For instance
, the movie
shows
that
people
don’t care to each other’s. The most
important
point is
a lot of
human values
is removed
;
therefore
, humans have
been converted
rotators.
robots
. Every person, who has conscience,
is killed
. If you cry, you will commit a crime.
However
, you can
see
this situation will
be disturbed
by 2
people
at the
end
of the movie.

In
reality you
can approximately
see
this condition in every country that
are controlled
by dictators.

In the
end
, I
think
we should
watch
films like
Alphaville
since they
make
us to have better mind.
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IELTS essay Write description of film you would recommend?

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