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The private car has brought more harm than benefits to the planet Agree or disagree? Give examples

The private car has brought more harm than benefits to the planet Agree or disagree? Give examples MymRN
As the technology arrived, the automobile industry could have an ascension due to this evolution. Which make it possible for people to commute easier between places. In spite that, the amount of cars and other vehicles has brought many disadvantages to the health of the environment and the commitment to the people’s safety. It is well know that the private cars have contributed to the greenhouse effect. In addition, the nowadays traffic has become more insecure for both drivers and pedestrians.
As the technology arrived, the automobile industry could have an ascension due to this evolution. Which
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make
it possible for
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people
to commute easier between places. In spite that, the amount of cars and other vehicles has brought
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disadvantages to the health of the environment and the commitment to the
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people
’s safety.

It is
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well know
that the private cars have contributed to the greenhouse effect.

In addition
, the nowadays traffic has become more insecure for both drivers and pedestrians.
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IELTS essay The private car has brought more harm than benefits to the planet Agree or disagree? Give examples

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