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write causes and how we discourage people from this habit :about people buy clothes and use them a short time then throw them away.

write causes and how we discourage people from this habit: about people buy clothes and use them a short time then throw them away. 0aGAO

In recent years, many people tend to buy new clothes to prepare for a special occasion or use them for a short time and then throw them away. This essay will examine the major causes and something to discourage people from this habit. To begin with, chasing trends to satisfy a temporary need. People want to stand out and feel more confident when they wear new clothes. Therefore, they do not think about long-term use goals. As a result, they have no control over their behavior, infatuation with beauty leads to more buying and irrational spending. We discourage people from this habit because it's a waste. Such spending will form bad spending habits. In conclusion, they want to catch up with trends and like beauty so they buy a lot and only use them for a short time. They should make a plan about their spending and have to hold back.

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people
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begin
 with, chasing trends to satisfy a temporary need. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 want to stand out and feel more confident when they wear new clothes. Therefore
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think
 about long-term This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 goals. As a result
, they have no control over their behavior, infatuation with beauty leads to more buying and irrational spending.

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people
 from this habit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it's a waste. Such spending will form This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 spending habits.

In conclusion
, they want to catch up with trends and like beauty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a lot and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 them for a short time. They should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a plan about their spending and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 hold back. 