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Describe your typical working day

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They say you can judge a day from the morning. Well, I can only say I wouldn't like people to judge me as quickly as I judge winter mornings. The embrace of shivering cold on my skin, the icy forming on my car's windshield, the feeble rays of sun making their way all too slowly for my taste would doom all winter work days. However, you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover. Let me tell you somethign about this season and all the changes I've undergone at my workplace.
They say you can
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a day from the morning. Well, I can
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winter mornings. The embrace of shivering
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cold
on my skin, the icy forming on my car's windshield, the feeble rays of sun making their way all too
slowly
for my taste would doom all winter work days.
However
, you shouldn't
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a book
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somethign
about this season and all the
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I've undergone at my workplace.
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IELTS essay Describe your typical working day

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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