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To begin with, I'm Sami Alanazi. I'm 18 years old. I'm from Saudi Arabia. My hometown is called Hafar Albatin. I have been living there for about 18 years. Moreover, I live with my parents. I have one sister and one brother. We have an amazing relationship. I want to be a successful chemical engineering, due to the fact that I'm interested in reading books about chemistry. Although I'm in love with chemistry, I'm passionate about physics and math. I am looking forward to improving my English skills more and more, consequently I decided to move to UK to pursue that goal. What about my favorite hobby? I especially like football, whenever, I have a chance to get together with my friends I go out with them. In sum up, I'm a person with an ambition to learn more about anything in the world that will be a reason to improve myself.
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. I'm from Saudi Arabia. My hometown
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Albatin
. I have been living there for about 18 years.
Moreover
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live
with my parents. I have one sister and one brother. We have an amazing relationship. I want to be a successful chemical engineering, due to the fact that I'm interested in reading books about chemistry. Although I'm in
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love
with chemistry, I'm passionate about physics and math. I am looking forward to improving my English
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skills
more and more,
consequently
I decided to
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move
to UK to pursue that goal. What about my favorite hobby? I
especially
like football, whenever, I have a chance to
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get
together with my friends I go out with them. In sum up, I'm a person with an ambition to learn more about anything in the world that will be a reason to
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improve
myself.
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IELTS essay Write and introduce yourself

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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