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Write an online article about how life has changed over the last 30 years. Write between 100-150 words

In my opinion life has changed a lot during 30 years. New invetions, new styles, new job opportunities. Nowdays everyone has their own smart phones and laptops, which is a huge help, because if you don't know about something you can just do a quick search and then you will understand it. Nowdays the kids grow up watching TV and playing on an Ipad back in the 90s that was not an opportunity. I think our world and how it developed made people more anti-social. And I become furious when I see a couple sitting in a restaurant and they not even talking they are using their phones. But I also prefer the modern world in someways. For example everything is easier, to go from one place to another or the travel, or the do the shopping. Overall the world is changing and we change with the world but I think it is normal and I am excited for the future.
In my opinion life has
changed
a lot during 30 years. New
invetions
, new styles, new job opportunities.
Nowdays
everyone has their
own
smart phones
and laptops, which is a huge
help
,
because
if you don't know about something you can
just
do a quick
search and
then you will understand it.
Nowdays
the kids grow up watching TV and playing on an
Ipad
back in the 90s that was not an opportunity. I
think
our
world
and how it developed made
people
more anti-social. And I become furious when I
see
a couple sitting in a restaurant and
they not even talking
they are using their phones.
But
I
also
prefer the modern
world
in someways.
For example
everything is easier, to go from one place to another or the travel, or
the do
the shopping.
Overall
the
world
is
changing and
we
change
with the
world
but
I
think
it is
normal and
I
am excited
for the future.
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IELTS essay Write an online article about how life has changed over the last 30 years. Write between 100-150 words

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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