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Write an online article about how life has changed over the last 30 years. Write between 150-200 words.

In this article, I am going to focus on the changes in the female-male roles, as well as in the acceptance of others, and also about pollution. In the last 30 years, the whole world has changed extremely. As I see it, females have gotten stronger, they have a bigger voice, and they are less afraid of the standards of society. In the workplace and also in the households we can see a big difference. Nowadays there are plenty of women who work as leaders of big companies. And also it's normal for dads to stay at home with the baby and for the mothers to go to work. Another interesting and very important change is about the acceptance of others. In the last 30 years, the acceptance of the people of the LGBTQ community has approved incredibly but we still have a lot to improve. After these two very positive changes, I would like to speak of a negative change as well which is pollution. It's true that a lot of people and organizations try to speak out and demonstrate, but sadly it's not enough. In conclusion, I think that these changes and also thanks to social media, more people can be aware of these problems and let’s hope that in the next 30 years we can live in a more acceptable and less contaminated world.
In this article, I am going to focus on the
changes
in the female-male roles,
as well
as in the acceptance of others, and
also
about pollution.

In the last 30 years, the whole world has
changed
extremely
. As I
see
it, females have gotten stronger, they have a bigger voice, and they are less afraid of the standards of society. In the workplace and
also
in the households we can
see
a
big
difference. Nowadays there are
plenty
of women who work as leaders of
big
companies
. And
also
it's normal for dads to stay at home with the baby and for the mothers to go to work.

Another interesting and
very
important
change
is about the acceptance of others. In the last 30 years, the acceptance of the
people
of the LGBTQ community has approved
incredibly
but
we
still
have a lot to
improve
.

After these two
very
positive
changes
, I would like to speak of a
negative
change
as well
which is pollution. It's true that
a lot of
people
and organizations try to speak out and demonstrate,
but
sadly
it's not
enough
.
In conclusion
, I
think
that these
changes
and
also
thanks to social media, more
people
can be aware of these problems and
let
’s hope that in the
next
30 years we can
live
in a more acceptable and less contaminated world.
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IELTS essay Write an online article about how life has changed over the last 30 years. Write between 150-200 words.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
227 words
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