Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Celebrities make a very good living out of the media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinions?

[In this state-of-the-art epoch, where technology is advancing by leaps and bounds that include media also which plays paramount role in our society. Some people deem that media can infiltrate in celebrities personal lives and they should not counteract when they feel harassment. However, I am totally against this notion and reasons for my inclinations are articulated in ensuing paragraphs. There are many reasons for this phenomenon that can go onto the list. First of all, celebrities are also human beings and everyone has basic rights to enjoy their privacy. Meanwhile, if media interfere in their personal life, it would ruin their happiness as well as it should create such drastic impact on society as whole. To quote an example media has blamed on a film producer Karan Johor for nepotism and due to this people have started disliking the film industry. Furthermore, the manifestationof successful people personal issues might put their carrier in danger and lead them to be depressed or in stress; moreover, it also draws wrong image of them in peopleʼs mind which may create insecurity for these celebrities. Where the famous Indian celebrity Sanjay Datt stands as an epitome. After pounding a great deal of thoughts and dedication with myself. I come up with the conclusion that media should not be a hindrance in stars personal lives. In addition, celebrities have the right to complain when their privacy is in vain due to media. ]
[In this state-of-the-art

epoch, where technology is

advancing by leaps and bounds

that include
media
also
which

plays paramount role in our

society.
Some
people
deem that
media
can infiltrate in celebrities

personal
lives and
they should

not counteract when they

feel harassment.
However
, I am

totally
against this notion and

reasons for my inclinations
are articulated
in ensuing

paragraphs.

There are
many
reasons for this

phenomenon that can go onto

the list.
First of all
, celebrities

are
also
human beings and

everyone has basic rights to

enjoy their privacy. Meanwhile,

if
media
interfere in their

personal life, it would ruin their

happiness
as well
as it should

create such drastic impact on

society as whole. To quote an

example
media
has blamed on a

film producer
Karan
Johor
for

nepotism and due to this
people


have
started
disliking the film

industry.

Furthermore
, the
manifestationof
successful
people
personal

issues might put their carrier in

danger
and lead them to
be depressed
or in

stress
;
moreover
, it
also
draws

wrong
image of them in
peopleʼs


mind which may create

insecurity for these celebrities.

Where the
famous
Indian

celebrity Sanjay
Datt
stands as

an epitome.

After pounding a great deal of

thoughts and dedication with

myself. I
come
up with the

conclusion that
media
should

not be a hindrance in stars

personal
lives
.
In addition
,

celebrities have the right to

complain when their privacy is in

vain due to
media
.
]
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Celebrities make a very good living out of the media attention and have chosen to live in the public spotlight. They have no right to complain when they feel the media are intruding on their privacy. with this opinions?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
238 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts