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Write an essay to discuss to what extent stress can affect one's life

Write an essay to discuss to what extent stress can affect one's life wMaeE
These days, the fast-paced life of the city has kept people in a hectic life with a great deal of work that's why more and more people are stressed. Some people claim that stress brings benefits to our lives, while some on the contrary that it has an adverse impact on the quality of one's life. I firmly believe that the advantages of being stressed are overshadowed by its disadvantages. In terms of the benefits, working under pressure increase people's courage and enthusiasm. If employees, for example, are afraid of losing their works, stress may stimulate them to raise their standards and make improvements they most likely would not have made without the threat of unemployment. In such a competitive world, pressure acts as a motivator that incites people to make a determined effort with a desire of having a successful life. Furthermore, being under stress is a useful way for people to manage their time effectively. Despite the above advantages, the body usually adapts to abnormal circumstances from a new or challenging situation that causes plenty of health problems. For instance, a student who often deal with a high level of academic stress throughout an academic year, experience health issues such as poor quality of sleep, high blood pressure, or severe depression. Moreover, a stressed person may feel more criticized by others, become more pessimistic, cynical, or resentful than usual. Therefore, people who experience these issues, can not think logically which leads to flawed decision-making. In conclusion, I reaffirm that the positive effects that stress has on our lives are outweighed by the disadvantages.
These days, the
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fast
-paced
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life
of the city has
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kept
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people
in a hectic
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life
with a great deal of work that's why more and more
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people
are
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stressed
.
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Some
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people
claim that
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stress
brings benefits to our
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lives
, while
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some
on the contrary
that it has an adverse impact on the quality of one's
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life
. I
firmly
believe that the advantages of being
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stressed
are overshadowed
by its disadvantages.

In terms of the benefits, working under pressure increase
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people
's courage and enthusiasm. If employees,
for example
, are afraid of losing their works,
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stress
may stimulate them to raise their standards and
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make
improvements they most likely would not have made without the threat of unemployment. In such a competitive world, pressure acts as a motivator that incites
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people
to
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make
a determined effort with a desire of having a successful
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life
.
Furthermore
, being under
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stress
is a useful way for
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people
to manage their time
effectively
.

Despite the above advantages, the body
usually
adapts to abnormal circumstances from a new or challenging situation that causes
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plenty
of health problems.
For instance
, a student who
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often
deal with a high level of academic
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stress
throughout an academic year, experience health issues such as poor quality of sleep, high blood pressure, or severe depression.
Moreover
, a
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stressed
person may feel more criticized by others, become more pessimistic, cynical, or resentful than usual.
Therefore
,
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people
who experience these issues, can not
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think
logically
which leads to flawed decision-making.

In conclusion
, I reaffirm that the
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positive
effects that
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stress
has on our
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lives
are outweighed
by the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay Write an essay to discuss to what extent stress can affect one's life

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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