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write an essay to an educated reader to discuss what ages in your opinion are more suitable to begin learning a foreign language. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write from 120 to 150 words.

write an essay to an educated reader to discuss what ages in your opinion are more suitable to begin learning a foreign language. You should write from 120 to 150 words. L3dq6
A book about education was written that: “Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school while others think children should begin at secondary school”. English is the most common language all over the world. There is no specific age to start learning English, you can learn at any time you are young or old. But in my opinion, children should start learning a foreign language at primary school. Because this is the age when children learn languages very quickly. Children are very good at imitating, so they can speak more standard English than adults. For example, city children learn English from a young age, so most of them are better at English than children in rural areas.
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learning a foreign
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at primary school while others
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all over the world. There is no specific age to
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at imitating,
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they can speak more standard English than adults.
For example
, city
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children
learn English from a young age,
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most of them are better at English than
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IELTS essay write an essay to an educated reader to discuss what ages in your opinion are more suitable to begin learning a foreign language. You should write from 120 to 150 words.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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